She wasnt soft, Cretive Response C

There are two main characters in this story so I am writing a letter to each of them.
Dear Paula,
I think it is great that you are true to yourself as an athlete. Your strength and drive to get better is unbelievable. I can imagine to get to the position you are in took a lot of hard work. And I am sure that the hard work is what forms your personality. From what I have seen, your personality can change from one place to another. It seems that you can be a very kind and friendly person, but also a tough person when focused. I can tell you do not really love Jason and I think that is what sets you back a little. On top of that, a couple days before each race you shut people out of you life even if they are trying to help you or wish you luck. Being an athlete I know when a little space is needed but having people around makes the training, preparation, and situation easier to manageable. I am sure eventually you will realize this. And I am sure that what ever happens between you and Jason, you will always be a strong, physically fit athlete who doesn’t give up on anything.
Dear Jason,
It appears you are a very laid back type of guy who takes things as they come. There is nothing wrong with that. You have your own supply shop and live an easy going life. There are times thought when you have to be serious. First of all lying to your girlfriend about your birthday is a bad idea. And then to top it off, making a big scene at a restaurant with Paula’s biggest competition right in front of Paula is a huge mistake. You should have thought about what you were going to do before acting that way. It was nice when you tried to apologize and wish her luck before the big race and I don’t think it was right for Paula to try to shut you out. The way you acted after she let you in could have been a little better. Finally when you tried to cheat things went way wrong. The problem could have been avoided but it also seemed like you wanted it to happen. Once you realized it was Paula in first, you could have easily taken a couple steps back and not given her the drink you made. It seemed like part of you wanted her to have the drink because your relationship was over. To tell you the truth she planned on leaving you after the race so it giving her the drink may not have been such a bad idea in you favor after all.